I predict that lina is going to get lost in the city while delivering a message when the lights go out and doon is going to go save her. i would of changed the fact that they got there job at age 12. For example, i would of wrote they start training at age 14 and they start working at age 15 because that way they would be more knowledgeable at what there doing.
Saturday, September 6, 2008
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Hey Stephen! I love how you give support for why you would have them get jobs at 15. How soon do you think the lights will go out and why?
how will Doon save Lina?
If you were Doon how would you save Lina? Especially if the lights were out?
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